can some one help me develop a thesis for my paper?
ganicity asked:
ok so my topic is the effectiveness of drug abuse programs in prisons and was thinking of writing this as my thesis
Drug abuse programs are effective based on certain contributes that make someone who is willing to seek treatment rather than being mandated by the courts.
what do you think,,,, is there anything that i should add to make it sound more arugmentive or better….10 points for best answer thanks so much
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#1. September 4th, 2009, at 10:18 AM.
“certain contributes” does not make sense- change to contributions
but your overall sentence is lacking clarity. I believe that you want to say that drug abuse programs are effective because they allow those who actively want to better themselves more proactive options….rework it